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D-Class + Application

Discussion in 'Denied' started by dodgamor, Jul 10, 2018.

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  1. dodgamor

    dodgamor Registered

    1.1)Steam ID: STEAM_1:0:172089547


    1.2)Steam Name: Denom ™


    1.3)Time with the community: About 2 days.


    1.4)Have you ever been demoted from D+ before? If so, why? Have not, This is my first time applying.


    [IC Section (Very important, think this through]


    2.1)In-game Name: Alex Joness


    2.3)Character's Description: Brown Eyes|5'9|Brown Hair|Somewhat Fat.


    2.4)Character's Backstory: (150 Words) I was walking through the woods one day and say a frog, I thought nothing of it, But realized the frogs water was infested with chemicals! I thought to myself... No, I'm just crazy. I walked home later that day. The next day I came back to the same pond. I saw the worst of it all. I rushed to the news station, And told everyone in my town... "They're putting chemicals in the water that are making the frogs gay!" No one believed me, they thought i was a psychopath. After that, I was mad, I knew the truth. I just didn't know what to do now. So I went rogue against my town. The police tried to stop me, But it was too late, I barricaded myself into a store and held a woman hostage This was I't. They got to me before I can do anything to anyone.
    [Question Section]


    3.1)Why are you here?: (2.4)


    3.2)Do you know what you are doing here?: Helping the scientists with tests, An incident occurred one day. I will never forget that day.


    3.3)A man in a white labcoat calls your number. What do you do?: Walk foward slowly and say, "Yes?"


    3.4)You see a giant reptilian creature running down the hall. How do you react?: Run in the other direction, If it follows, I know my destiny.


    3.5)In the middle of testing you hear gunfire, and an explosion. What do you do?: Listen to every command any officers give to me.
     
    Last edited: Jul 11, 2018
  2. Lawner

    Lawner Super Admin Super Admin SCPRP Staff Recruitment Team

    1.1 Use SteamID Finder to get your steam ID.
    2.3 Its a Physical description. Not something that tells what you do.
    2.4 Not 150 words. Also, explain it in greater detail. Don't be vague on how you murdered.
    3.2 Being shot at? You don't know that.
    24 hours to fix.
     
  3. dodgamor

    dodgamor Registered

    Fixed most of it.
     
  4. Lawner

    Lawner Super Admin Super Admin SCPRP Staff Recruitment Team

    Sorry buddy. You posted it after the 24 hours limit.
    Denied/Locked
    Improve the backstory a bit more, you need to add a bit more to get that death sentence.
     
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